Writing Reviews and Rants - Comments, page 5

@theteenagefandom
No, really it was very good. You have a very intriguing plot, and I feel like it has a lot of potential. With a little editing, you just may have a masterpiece on your hands! ;)

I really shouldn't have bothered even trying to do present tense as I always switch back to past automatically...I was noticing a lot of errors myself a few days ago and recently started fixing it but :P *sigh* *shakes head* Shame on me...xD

Whoa you weren't kidding when you said you were thorough...xD
Thanks for your advice - It'll help a lot :D

@iJay

aw, thanks!

@Torissa Nikole
My god thank you so much. Everyone's raving about Crystalline Melodies. I have to check it out right now:)

@iJay
I'd be glad to. Looks very interesting, just going by your tag line and chapter titles.

can you add me to your line? I have this one fanfic- the Rebirth? It's completed and so long; I understand if you only want to read a couple chapters of it and review those. Of course, there's no rush or anything. Thank you so much for just making this page in general:)

That's fine! :) Thank you so much!

@The Bright One
I will definitely check it out. I've got a bit of a line now, but I will get to it as soon as I can! =)

Hello! :)
If you have any time would you please be able to review my story 'The Runner'? I've hit a rough patch with the plot and I'd love to hear a second opinion on how it's going thus far before I decide to continue on with the idea I want to try and follow. It's 24 chapters so far and they're all relatively short :)
(Please note, I use the British grammar format as I live in New Zealand so some words may be spelt differently and some of my colloquialisms may be wrong)

@Torissa Nikole
Awesome.

@Torissa Nikole
Okay! Whenever I actually get around to it..

@TheDreamKeeper
Most definitely. Already started reading it. Again, tho, it will probably take a good while. I am very very thorough.

Hit me brotha!
Feel free to tear apart Rise of the Night as much as I did your story! Seriously, like we agreed on, criticism, especially harsh criticism, is the best!
I'd be honored if you reviewed my books!

@theteenagefandom
Totally feel you there. I have a terrible habit of ranting (in a good way, I hope), so expect something probably long.

@Torissa Nikole
Thanks! I really want someone to tell me what I'm doing right or wrong not just...good job. *rolls eyes*

@MorningStar
Well, as soon as you get it up, I'd be glad to help.

@theteenagefandom
Yeah, I'll definitely look into it!

I won't make you read Half-Blooded, Half-Chosen, (unless you want to read like 50 chapters) BUTTT could you review either I'm Always Here or By Your Hand as I'm not that secure on them? :D *hopeful*

@Torissa Nikole
I'd ask for a review, but my story's not up yet. so...

@Grafon, I will definitely check it out! Looks pretty long, but again, as Christmas break is looming, I should be able to read it soon. Midterms tomorrow, though, so I will probably have to wait to start til next week...