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Writing Reviews and Rants

Summary

MY CRITIQUE PHILOSOPHY:

"Expectation destroys joy."
If you are always expecting to be praised, it takes the joy out of it when it actually happens. Plus, it gives you a deeper hole of disappointment to fall into when/if you DON'T get praised. To quote my version of the common phrase, "Your ego is like a balloon. There's a certain range that it was meant to stay in, and as long as it stays there, you probably don't have anything to worry about. However, if you blow it up too big, then you are instantly more susceptible to being popped."

"Failure is feedback. Feedback is a gift."
If your work is filled with mess-ups, that's okay. It doesn't mean YOU'RE a mess-up. It just teaches you both what to do and what not to do next time.

"Your perspective defines your reality."
If you choose to think that feedback is mean/pointless/annoying, then that's what it will be to you. If you choose to accept it as an opportunity to better yourself and your writing, then THAT'S what it will be to you.

I have always believed in constructive criticism, and I have always loved to help people with their writing. I don't claim to be an expert, but I do enjoy giving my opinions as a reader and a writer. See Chapter 1 for more information.

Quotes by Shawn Fernandez
Also, I have lots of different opinions on writing, and would like a place to post them. If you don't want to read them, fine. They're mostly there for me. But if you do, feel free! Maybe they'll help some.

NOTE: YOU ABSOLUTELY MUST READ THE FIRST CHAPTER IN FULL BEFORE REQUESTING A REVIEW AND/OR CRITIQUE.

Chapters

  1. The Gist of It

    Rules! READ BEFORE REQUESTING

  2. "I'm Always Here" Critique

    for theteenagefandom

  3. "The Runner" Review

    for The Bright One

  4. "Demigod Origins: Reyna Avila Ramirez-Arellano" Critique

    for MrJoker20

  5. "A Very Cold Reunion" Critique

    for RecklessDaring

  6. Random Rant #1

    Erotica vs. Porn

  7. SORRY, SO SORRY

    Update!

  8. Bad Writing

    Slipped through the quality filtering cracks, apparently...

  9. "Dear Fanfiction" Review

    for Araneae Siqua

Comments

Can you please review my story "The Will of The Gods" with a depth of 3 and a harshness of 3? It is yet to be completed so please tack that into account. Thank you!

who was i again who was i again
12/15/19

@Torissa Nikole
Please review my story "The Life of Kara Beckham" with a depth of 2 and harshness of 3. It is not finished yet so please excuse tat fact in your review.

Sadie Chase Sadie Chase
3/20/15

@iJay
It really depends on how they present it. If it's anobviously intentional clone, then no, I don't approve of it. That's lazy. I say make your own character with as few outside influences as possible. If it turns out to be similar to something else, that's alright: there's no way you can create a 100% original character. You can always tweak it a bit later to make it different, and your writing style should be different enough that the characters aren't ridiculously comparable.
no I haven't read Fangirl.

wikipedia says it's true; some newspapers from 2012 back it up; nothing recent, but there's a link to her original name "snowqueens icedragon" and her fanfic. good enough for me. she got her twilight fan fiction published.
well, there's harry styles fan fiction that also got published. I kind of want to know how you feel about that. Isn't that kind of plagiarism? To just change the names but steal the characters? Have you ever read Fangirl? They talk about this sort of plagiarism a little bit.

iJay iJay
1/8/15

@iJay
Yeah, I think I heard that somewhere. It's pretty dang pathetic.