Writing Reviews and Rants - Comments, page 4

It is a LONG STORY SO DON'T GIVE YOURSELF AN ULCER WITH THE THOROUGHNESS JUST BE AS THOROUGH AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN WITHOUT FEELING LIKE YOU WANT TO KILL YOURSELF. Thank you:) -ijay; story: the rebirth

May I have a review on The Rebirth, harshness 8. EIGHT. MAKE ME CRY, HONEY. and a thoroughness of 5:))))
-iJay

I'd like to submit my story called Dear Fanfiction. Harshness: 3-4 Depth: About 3-4 as well

@Homer
Thanks! I'll add them to the list. Love your username, btw!

If you have the time, I'd love to have you review my two stories! Daughter of Hera and Rachel Dare: Adventures at Clarion Ladies Academy. (If you don't have time for DoH I understand.) For RA:ACLA Maybe 4-depth and 5-harsh? For DoH Probably 3-depth and 5-harsh. Emphasis for both on story/plot and overall character development. (Also, any ideas you come up with on the way would be really helpful.)
This is an awesome idea you have here too! It's pretty cool.

@Torissa Nikole
Oh, good to know :3 It's only two chapters currently :D

@MrJoker20
I'll add it to the list!

Note to all, the shorter the work, the faster I'll probably get to it.

I would like to place an order for a review :D Ekhm...

One review for my Demigod Origins story, with additional in-depth of 3 and harshness of 4 with some focus on characterization and dialogues.

@Reckless Daring
I'd be glad to help! However, I will need the information demonstrated in "Rule Update" (Chapter 3) before I can begin.

@TheDreamKeeper
I see you've given me the GDocs version. This opens many more options for how I do your review. I can give you a summary for the story as a whole but go in depth with comments and/or suggestion-editing on the doc. Or I could keep to the same style I did with theteenagefandom's story. It's up to you. Just thought I'd put that out there.

Please review my story.
Extreme writer's block and I need help, so...any ideas would be welcome as well.

@Torissa Nikole
No it's okay, whichever you'd prefer will do fine! :)

@Torissa Nikole
Thanks!

@The Bright One
Don't worry about it! I can up it to a 3 if you'd like.

The Runner please? I'd like a depth of about 2 (I don't want to take up all your time) and a harshness of 8, I really need an honest reviewer to tell me everything I need to fix

@Chrissy Noelle
Sure!

@Torissa Nikole

Could you review I Have Anger Issues... for me? I'd like a line edit for Chapter 1 (It's the only chapter I have right now, so...) using Google Doc suggestions, and a harshness of level 4 for the line edit. And can you also critique the character descriptions at a harshness of level 4 as well? Thanks!

@Torissa Nikole
Wonderful! Yeah, after all it is 170 pages. and then the nest two are 229 and 272. So it'll be an endeavor but hopefully an enjoyable one.

@TheDreamKeeper
Most definitely! I'll get right on it. Break literally just started today for me, so I should have time, but it'll still probably take awhile.

"Can you review Rise of the Night for me? I'd like a thoroughness of 5 and a harshness of 7 with an emphasis on characters and style/description. Thanks! I recommend you read that link because that's the most recent version!"

@Grafon
@TheDreamKeeper
@The Bright One
@iJay
Please read my updated chapter and resubmit your requests accordingly! Thanks, and sorry for the inconvenience!